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the comments on my past elevator pitch where positive. Not one person criticized
it. But I have gotten some constructive criticism on other assignments dealing
with my idea. I got a lot of whether my idea was possible due to sea
levels, where in my business venture was I going to make money, where am I
going to get money to start it and ideas on how to make it more eco-friendly.
For starters Gainesville is above sea levels although there are some areas that
are not, so my company would have to run a lot of test just to make sure the
areas we are building the garages will have space. Also my garages will only be
of 2 floors or less. We would create more space by expanding sideways
(horizontally) rather than downwards (vertically). The second and third points
go hand in hand. My plan is to make money through the decals but we are a
construction company, not a service provider. So businesses, schools or even
the government would contract us and pay us to make these garages and it would
be up to them to monitor them.
I think this is a great idea. I know I have had a problem before with parking, and I would definitely use these parking garages. I think you need to figure out if it would be possible to make underground parking garages since Gainesville is not very elevated. Also, I think you should try to speak a little louder, and add some enthusiasm to your speech. Overall, I was interested because it is a product/service that I would use, and it seems like you have done a good amount of research on the topic. Check out my blog at http://luissoto93.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Alo,
ReplyDeleteI want to start by saying you did a really good job.
I would have liked you to have added some excitement, but it was not as bad as I think I may be coming across. Really good job. It sounds like you know what you are talking about!
Here is my third elevator pitch, posted on my blog.
http://rileyent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html