What I ended up coming up with for my business opportunity was underground parking garages for populated areas, concentrating on the city of Gainesville. I don’t know if this is possible considering Florida’s geography, like the soil and etc. But I just went for it. I named my company Advanced Construction, and my scrip and video of my elevator pitch is below.
“Hi, my name is Alondra Ramos and welcome to Gainesville Florida where I have 7 visitor parking spaces in front of my apartment for my friends and family to use, but they are all inconveniently taken. Where towing companies make a fortune from individuals parking where they are not “supposed to” and where scooters are a more popular choice of transportation because of their size.
Gainesville is a small city not intended to hold such a big population. And that is why I am proposing building underground parking garages.
My company, Advanced Construction, would build the most efficient, ecofriendly, underground parking garages that will eliminate the need for you to be at the bus stop 40minutes before your class even starts, will decrease the chances of your car getting towed and having to pay a $100 dollar fine, and most immortally not being able to find a parking spot.”
Hello Alo,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch! I think you have a really good idea, and you spoke clearly throughout. I'm from Key West, which is at sea level so there's nothing underground; I never would have thought of this idea! I have heard countless numbers of students complain about parking on and off campus, and I know that parking and towing are also issues at my apartment complex as well.
Here's my elevator pitch:
http://mariakongosfirstblogever.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
I think the idea of underground garages is a great idea! I like the fact that you took into consideration the idea that there is not a lot of space in Gainesville. I think that all apartments have little to no parking for guest. You not only found a new idea but also a solution for an existing problem that may get in your way. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHere is mine! Check it out: http://bridgettdavis85.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-week-5.html
Awesome idea! I think that this is a great idea for Gainesville. I would just say that maybe you could have put in a little more research to see if this is a possibility for our area. Because we are so close to the sea, I'm not sure that it is. But with the research you could have figured out whether this is a viable business or not. Other than that, I think you did great. You spoke very clearly, business attire, and you made eye contact with the camera at all times. Thanks for sharing! Great idea. Check out my blog at http://summerborges.blogspot.com/
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